i'm working on marcus printup's website - please don't pay any attention to the content of greeking - i'd appreciate any critiques on, layout, color choices, or design. the tour updates are bogus too until i get the actual content.
i really like the color scheme and all. layout is nontraditional, but works. will you be changing out the pictures of marcus on the right side there, or is that one staying put throughout? it'd be cool if that photo could change upon each reload or something. do i know how to do that? oh, hell no. i just think it'd be cool.
the only other suggestion i have is to tighten up the kerning on "marcusprintup.com" in the upper left...make it emulate the logo in the lower right. also, it'd be cool to add in a graphical element up there. think of it as that logo remixed. my suggestion would be "marcusprintup.com(trumpet)" with the (trumpet) being the same trumpet used in the logo down at the bottom.
but overall, this is tight. has marcus seen it yet? what does your boss think?
thanks for the input - the earlier version had the (remixed trumpet) logo. boss seems cool with the layout - he commented about the fibonocci sequence or the golden mean with the rectangle arrangement. think he sent the design to marcus so we're waiting for approval. the pictures are kind of limited...he sent us a press release kit but it only had one pic...this was actually from the folder cover.
I like the layout & design very much, especially your color choices. The design of the individual pieces with their little bolts & "etchings" are just good enough to make the site look great without drawing any specific attention to themselves.
The image could use a tiny little bit of touching up around it's edges but that's easy. I really do like this site layout altogether.
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i really like the color scheme and all. layout is nontraditional, but works. will you be changing out the pictures of marcus on the right side there, or is that one staying put throughout? it'd be cool if that photo could change upon each reload or something. do i know how to do that? oh, hell no. i just think it'd be cool.
the only other suggestion i have is to tighten up the kerning on "marcusprintup.com" in the upper left...make it emulate the logo in the lower right. also, it'd be cool to add in a graphical element up there. think of it as that logo remixed. my suggestion would be "marcusprintup.com(trumpet)" with the (trumpet) being the same trumpet used in the logo down at the bottom.
but overall, this is tight. has marcus seen it yet? what does your boss think?
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The image could use a tiny little bit of touching up around it's edges but that's easy. I really do like this site layout altogether.
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